Saturday, May 11, 2013

Rule-Breaker comic part 1

                                                        
  Here is my comic cover on top. I did not put lettering because i felt like it would destroy the art, so i will explain the story whole comic to you.

 The old women explain how she lost here cat to detective Rule-Breaker and Trouble-Maker.
She is hiring them to find Lola the cat. They gladly take the job and head out.


                           The first place they look for Lola the cat is under the old ketchup factory.


Rule-Breaker is shook to finds the cat napper. The strange man does not want give up, so he run for it with Lola the cat.
                                Rule-Breaker is telling him to give up, or he will beat the crap out of him.


                 Trouble-Maker fasting thinking in trying to help to catch the cat, made every thing worse.


 It looks like there is no hope for the cat napper, but also no hope for Rule-Breaker and Trouble-Maker to escape as well.

                                                                Looks like this is the end.

They both awake and wounder how in the world did they get out of that situation and where did Lola the cat go.

                                 What is that under Rule-Breakers hat, a clue and a lead.


There next lead send them to a dance club called "Jail Club". Rule-Breaker hates the club scene, Trouble-Maker loves it. Trouble-Maker go's out to dance and Rule-Breaker choices to wait for the mysteries person that send them the note.


     It does not take that long for the person to show. Rule-Breaker as so many question like why, how and where is Lola the cat. She does not answer any of them. She tell Rule-Breaker her name and that is Kiki.


 Kiki tells Rule-Breaker she needs help with a investigation and nothing. You have no choice she says to Rule-Breaker. Kiki kidnaps Trouble-Maker for not agreeing to help. 


The panic begins. 
Starting to look hopeless for Rule-Breaker to find Trouble-Maker.
Until a random guy told him where she went. They went to the run down factory he said.
                                                                                                 

The random guy pulls a cell phone out when Rule-Breaker left. He called Kiki to tell Rule-Breaker is coming. Rule-Breaker pulls out his recorder because he feels like this is a setup.

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